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On the last day of camp we went to the pools in Panmure. We were taking turns on the hydro-slides when it was my turn I was zooming rapidly through the hydro-slide. I was spinning around the hydro-slide heaps of time. And then first time finished. Back up on the stairs I was waiting for my turn to go on the hydro-slide
Hi Tevita I'm really shore you had a good time. Miss Flavle said I can come but I didn't won't to. If I was there I would of went to the diving pool. I like to boam of hi places.
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ReplyDeleteThat was a cool writing you have done so keep up the good work Tevita