Prospective Writing -- Tevita and Setefano

The determined boy was dangling from the icy mountain. As he approached the tip of the mountain he pulled himself up with all his might he was relieved that he had achieved his goal. As he arrived at the main entrance of the dojo, he was shy and cold. All of a sudden a creepy old man had opened the door. The man with a penetrating stare at the boy was making the kid scared asking if he could come inside, but every time he knocks on the door the mischievous old man tells the boy to go away.

The boy felt disappointed shoulders and head fell. The second time his mind thought the master did not want him at the dojo, so he left and he felt that had to prove himself. So he busted the door down and wanted to have a showdown with him. The master pointed again and he saw the sign USE THE SIDE ENTRANCE! He felt ashamed when he saw the sign. He was just embarrassed. The End!