Tevita Writing Sample

It was a hot  and sunny day kids playing around Ice cream melting burning feet and lots of people going for a swim. They were jumping of the rocks doing bombs splashing in the water playing volleyball in the water. Blaze was going to do a bomb but then he slipped into water and cracked his head. His mother called the ambulance to take him to the hospital.

His parents came to check on him. Blaze had heaps of bruises on his arms his legs and especially on his head because it was cracked. The Mum was screaming IS HE GOING TO BE ALRIGHT!! she shouted to the doctor.  

“lately afternoon” they came again to check on Blaze. He didn’t feel that good he felt like he was going to die. MY SON IS GOING TO DIE! she was panicking the mum was running around acting stupid she fainted. The computer went BEEEEP and he past away.